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oneDPA phase 2 has officially begun! Following the end of the initial consultation phase, we counted your votes, collated them, and incorporated your chosen principles within the oneDPA v0…
- Kaveesha
- Design & Tech Lead
- Kaveesha
- updated 1 yr ago
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v0 oneDPA quick feedback notes
Hi all, thanks for the work and the speed :-) A rather quick review, unfortunately I currently cannot dive deeper and only provide a quick feedback of some small and some more content-driven topics…
- Baltasar Cevc
- Project lead // Owner/Rechtsanwalt (German attorney-at-law)
- Baltasar
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Controller AND Processor
I mentioned this on the LinkedIn post so would like to explain further here. We are often in a situation where we act predominantly as an independent Controller but may also be acting as a Processor.…
- Sebastian Goldsmith
- General Counsel
- Sebastian_Goldsmith
- 1 yr ago
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My 2 cents feedback :)
Hello everyone! That's great to see so much collaboration between professionals around this project. As promised, here attached is my review of the v0 one DPA and Module 1.…
- Marco Mendola
- Legal Innovation Superhero
- Marco_Mendola
- updated 1 yr ago
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Minor comments
Hi Firstly, a great effort on bringing some structure and simplicity to this sometimes contentious contractual topic. Just some minor comments from my side.…
- Richard Ancrum
- General Counsel EMEA
- Richard_Ancrum
- 1 yr ago
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Feedback on v0 draft
I have provided my comments in the document itself. This is very good work. My overarching comment is that the narrative of how all of the documents work together should be more developed to make…
- Paula Doyle
- CEO
- Paula_Doyle
- 1 yr ago
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- Last replyNatashaThomasTop Contributor1 yr ago
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suggestion to use more intra-document references
The documents look good. Great work! Currently there is a lot of adjustment necessary, e.g. as the parties called by their roles throughout the Ts&Cs part..…
- Michael HoffmannTop Contributor
- Senior Legal Counsel
- Michael_Hoffmann
- 1 yr ago
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- Last replyMichael HoffmannTop Contributor1 yr ago
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Representative
The reference to the appointment of a Representative in the "Variable" / "Supervision" sections of the Modules 1-3 documents is helpful, but doesn't take account of the large proportion of companies…
- Tim Bell
- Managing Director
- Tim_Bell
- 1 yr ago
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few tweaks
Don't think you need to reference this anymore. [European Union Regulation (EU) 2016/679 as amended and incorporated into English law under the UK European Union (Withdrawal) Act 2018,…
- Nicolette Nowak
- Associate General Counsel
- Nicolette_Nowak
- 1 yr ago
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feedback
Hi all, Having review the oneDPA v0 documents we do not have any more comments to add :) Looking forward to the final version!
- Angelika Majchrowska
- Legal Advisor Data Protection
- angelika
- 1 yr ago
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Why not mirror Article 28(3) in section 2.2?
If we mirrored the language direct from GDPR, word-for-word, then this would be pretty non-contentious. By making changes and imposing standards that go beyond those in the GDPR,…
- David JonesTop Contributor
- CEO
- David_Jones
- 1 yr ago
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- Last replyElectra JaponasModerator1 yr ago
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A few comments
Variables section - should we add a field to identify processing locations, to help Controller's with risk review?; Controller obs (2.1) - Where a Controller makes data available for a group of…
- Jimmy Elliott
- Senior Director, EMEA Legal
- Jimmy_Elliott
- 1 yr ago
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- Last replyElectra JaponasModerator1 yr ago
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Additional Safeguards
Many of my customers have their own flavour of additional safeguards which they wish to add to the DPA for transfers to third countries. Is this what the "special provisions" variable is for and…
- Jimmy Elliott
- Senior Director, EMEA Legal
- Jimmy_Elliott
- 1 yr ago
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- Last replyElectra JaponasModerator1 yr ago
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Intra-group agreements
Hi Perhaps just me missing it - or could spelled out as an option in square brackets - but IDTAs are not necessarily required in the event of an intra-group agreement by the processor, e.g.…
- Harry Borovick
- Head of Legal
- Harry_Borovick
- 1 yr ago
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- Last replyHarry Borovick1 yr ago
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Joint controllers
I'm not clear on whether the joint controller section relates to two independent data controllers or joint controllers? If the latter, I'm not sure the obligations meet the requirements of a…
- Antonia Thomlinson
- Privacy Manager
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- 1 yr ago
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- Last replyElectra JaponasModerator1 yr ago
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Why not mirror Article 28(3) in section 2.2?

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